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The paper draft is here:
The draft document may be found at this URL: http://cdsweb.cern.ch/record/1390459

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I Introduction

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33 strike 'the full 2010 data sample' -- lumi is the interesting bit now.
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33 strike 'the full 2010 data sample' -- lumi is the interesting bit now.
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139 The use of online and on-line is not consistent. It is also imprecise
to say online - it should be defined in terms of the algorithms
and corrections in the introduction. Similarly for offline.
Saying selected "online" is just saying triggered?
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139 The use of online and on-line is not consistent. It is also imprecise
to say online - it should be defined in terms of the algorithms
and corrections in the introduction. Similarly for offline.
Saying selected "online" is just saying triggered?
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L191 and 194 -> Is there a reference for "MLM matching scheme" and "CKKW matching scheme"?
 195-200 use semicolons instead of commas to separate the list items.

212 Is the min bias here matched to what was measured (by Glasgow?!)

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271 Since the cut on JVF >.75, does that mean we have an effective
rapidity cut on eta >2.5? But we see later plots going out fairly far...
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271 Since the cut on JVF >.75, does that mean we have an effective
rapidity cut on eta >2.5? But we see later plots going out fairly far...
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  For jets faking electrons the reliability is much worse because the simualtion has to get fine details of the ahdronic shower correct (e.g. every variable that we cut on in the electron finder)
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372-381 Confusing as to what is actually changed. Perhaps the cuts should
just be given in a table.
Fig 4: This one has a supressed zero but Fig 2 does not.
The qcd distributions are not smooth and should either be
smoothed (interpolate with sys on interpolation) or discarded
with some upper limit for sys.
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372-381 Confusing as to what is actually changed. Perhaps the cuts should
just be given in a table.
Fig 4: This one has a supressed zero but Fig 2 does not.
The qcd distributions are not smooth and should either be
smoothed (interpolate with sys on interpolation) or discarded
with some upper limit for sys.
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490 The background events with a muon and an energetic jet dont survive?
To what degree and what happens when we have 2fb?
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490 The background events with a muon and an energetic jet dont survive?
To what degree and what happens when we have 2fb?
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  Fig 15 caption “left: electron channel, right: muon channel” should be “top: electron channel and bottom: muon channel”
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Fig 16 caption left -> top, right->bottom.
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Fig 16 caption left -> top, right->bottom.
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  Figures 12, 13, 14, 15, 16 – I think first line of caption needs re-phrasing. Maybe: “Uncorrected pseudorapidity difference between...” or something like that...
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869 Would be good to reflect these conclusions in the abstract.

Fig 26: In spite of what the abstract says, sherpa is very poor here
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869 Would be good to reflect these conclusions in the abstract.

Fig 26: In spite of what the abstract says, sherpa is very poor here
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  Figure 19 – In the caption you mention “and the ratio of theoretical predictions to data” but there is no such thing in the figure, or is it?
 
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