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| > > | General Comments on the paper layout and StyleComments on the analysis/methodology
Specific comments on the textAbstractline 5: "up to 5 jets" seems to imply that the measurement is in bins of n excusive jets, however in fact the measurement if in bins of n inclusive jets. Obviously "up to 5 or more jets" doesn't work, but there must be a better way to write this.Data and Online Event Selectionline 101: "On the average" -> "On average" line 110 and 116: here you separately use "on-line" and "offline" , in section titles you use "online" and "off-line"; be consistent!Off-line Event AnalysisJet Selectionline 271: use \mbox to prevent wrap around of the inequality for JVFMissing Tranverse Energy and %$ M_T $%line 300: if the reader looks at reference [39] they will find extensive discussion of calcualtion and performance for "missing transverse momentum", not "missing transverse energy" line 301: use \mbox to prevent wrap-around of the %$ M_T $% formulaReferencesreference [18] is not the appropriate one for single top production with MC@NLO - you should use, in addition: S. Frixione, E. Laenen, P. Motylinski, Single-top production in MC@NLO. J. High Energy Phys. 03, 092 (2006) and S. Frixione, E. Laenen, P. Motylinski, B.R. Webber, C.D. White, Single-top hadroproduction in association with a W boson. J. High Energy Phys. 07, 029 (2008) | |||||||
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